AICE Media Studies blog

For my revision deals with my two-paged article. My first version didn't have enough text and I needed to fit my pictures. So, When I went back to fix it, I used Adobe InDesign instead of Publisher. I fixed my body text and even added a quote from the owner that was off their website. Also, I made the title bigger and added a dominate photo underneath. On the second page, I fixed my other pictures and text to fit around them. It looks more professional and put together and I made sure to fill in all the extra white space I had without making the text itself look too big. Also added branding and page numbers to the bottom pages. Overall, I'm happy with the changes I made.  On my table of contents, I didn't change much. I added branding and the page number to the bottom corner. As a group we finalized the fonts we would be using, so I changed the font on the "contents" to one I had on my cover. I slightly rearranged the article titles to be move even but over all I...

For my 3rd revision I changed my cover. So the picture i originally had turned out very blurry and distorted. Also it had an American flag, and when i got feed back, didn't fit well with the theme of my issue. So i re shot my cover photo. I used the same model but changed location and added a touch of a coffee in her hand. I had to use photos shop to get rid of a giant water spill on the ground but couldn't completely remove it.  I also changed the title font and sizing to be uniform with the other people in my group. i spaced it differently too to fill space. I moved the words "Italian issue" to the bottom to make it more prominent. I moved my text boxes and article titles to fit around the door frame of my picture. Overall, I'm happy with the changes i made.